Thanks to Trifecta, I know exactly how hard it is to condense a thought into just 33 words. Hard, I tell you, very hard! But thanks for the challenge guys!
"A year since the divorce. Living in a small apartment without Daddy. Once called the “red apartments” disdainfully. Shabby outside, even shabbier inside. Nothing like the new two-story where they were a family."
Quote of the Day: "There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
--Ernest Hemingway
This is so sad. Good choice of words!
ReplyDeleteI love the "look" of the shabby red apartments and her(?) used-to-be view of them.
ReplyDeleteI felt like the child had lost innocence with the new two story. I really felt most strongly at the point of contrasting the old apartments with the new two story.
ReplyDeleteOh man. This was sad.
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